रात

Wednesday, September 23, 2009

रात के अंधेरे में

इन आँखों ने कई बार

ज़िन्दगी को बिखरते देखा है

ख़्वाबों की इमारत टूटते

तो उम्मीदों का दामन छूटते देखा है

बादलों को रंग बदलते

तो तारों को डूबते देखा है

कई बार आंसुओं से छलकती खामोशी

तो कभी हँसी को गूंजते देखा है

हाँ , रात के इस अंधेरे में कई बार

ख़ुद को बिगड़ते

तो कभी संवरते देखा है

शायद तभी कहते अंधेरे को घना हैं

पहलू में अपने समेटे कायनात

न जाने ये कब से तना है !!

13 comments:

  1. beautiful...poem' really'
    dere's sum trouble wid last 4lines...they r nt clear' bt except that..the rest is really creative n laudable.

  1. anushree said...:

    #virendra
    thanks for writing the last four lines are philosophical..there is a deep meaning!!
    hope if u read it once again for my sake u'll understand..between how u hv been doing?
    long tym!

  1. ur most welcome dear..bt i didn't mean i cudn't understand those lines..few words r missing dere..u wud'hv written it bt they hvn't been translated properly...perhaps.
    they hv been converted into symbols..read ur poem widout logging in...i hope u'll get da point'

  1. anushree said...:

    # virendra
    thanks hv made the changes...

  1. रात के अंधेरे में

    इन आँखों ने कई बार

    ज़िन्दगी को बिखरते देखा है

    ...पहलू में अपने समेटे कायनात

    न जाने ये कब से तना है !!

    bahut sundar !

  1. As usual.. captivating and mesmerizing... :)
    Imaginative poem with gr8 metaphorical sense...
    Enjoyed it lot...
    Cheers!!

  1. anushree said...:

    #amit
    thanks ur comments are always welcomed..as they boost my spirirt..thanks again.

  1. good..now these lines r clear'

  1. paramveer said...:

    nicely written!!!:)

  1. its a beautiful poem. so true in darness we find and discover our real selves:-)

  1. anushree said...:

    #paramveer
    thanks n u r welcomed on my blog..m glad u liked it.

  1. anushree said...:

    #kishore chaudhary
    thanks for appreciating..

  1. anushree said...:

    #butterfly thought
    thanks m glad u liked it
    keep visiting!