
रात

13 comments:
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#virendra
thanks for writing the last four lines are philosophical..there is a deep meaning!!
hope if u read it once again for my sake u'll understand..between how u hv been doing?
long tym!
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ur most welcome dear..bt i didn't mean i cudn't understand those lines..few words r missing dere..u wud'hv written it bt they hvn't been translated properly...perhaps.
they hv been converted into symbols..read ur poem widout logging in...i hope u'll get da point'
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रात के अंधेरे में
इन आँखों ने कई बार
ज़िन्दगी को बिखरते देखा है
...पहलू में अपने समेटे कायनात
न जाने ये कब से तना है !!
bahut sundar !
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As usual.. captivating and mesmerizing... :)
Imaginative poem with gr8 metaphorical sense...
Enjoyed it lot...
Cheers!!
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#amit
thanks ur comments are always welcomed..as they boost my spirirt..thanks again.
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its a beautiful poem. so true in darness we find and discover our real selves:-)
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#paramveer
thanks n u r welcomed on my blog..m glad u liked it.
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#butterfly thought
thanks m glad u liked it
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beautiful...poem' really'
dere's sum trouble wid last 4lines...they r nt clear' bt except that..the rest is really creative n laudable.