Thursday, March 17, 2011

Let it be a typical weekend night, let’s party , said arjun, hoping to put her at ease.
Going giddy headed with all that partying and beer cans it got very late and dark, the black fabric of night could swallow almost everything.
“if you know someone who tries to drown their sorrows…………said drishti
…….You might tell them sorrows know how to swim, continued arjun.(quoted in p.s. I love you)
And they both giggled. This was  their another common like.
Her cellphone beeped again and a sudden chill grip her chest.
Why don’t you spit it out or let me see who’s it, his was a firm voice.
She haven’t ever talked of it with anyone but wanted to tell him, drishti hid her problems from her boyfriend but usually discussed them in detail with arjun.
Staring at the moon in it’s first quarter she proceeded, I was sexually abused as a child,she gulped and then continued , her voice turning deep,
Though it never bothered the roll of my life until when I discovered what it was ..looking at the star which detached itself  and fell, she cried secretly.
By now arjun was deeply aware of her melancholy…
She continued, and even before I could realize, I was in this impossible love with tarun(boyfriend), of which I thought was just a passing phase, but life was putting me in a direction I didn’t want to go in.

 to be continued......


  1. Virendra said...:

    You've become now expert in story telling:) bt still i can predict ur story ahead hehe;)kidding...
    anyways..good job!!

    keep blogging:)

  1. anushree said...:

    as always the first one to comment:)
    thanks for appreciating my work.
    and u hav no clue of the story..fluke will not work ok..
    to know whats next keep reading..

  1. PULKIT said...:

    so now there are directorial touches too. falling stars associating with ripples of emotions and what not! gripping and well packaged.

    one blogging text suggestion - mention the parts written in brackets at the footnote or postscript. it would appear better that way :) :)
    for example - making a star over the quote and then at the footnote mentioning , inspiring source - P.S. I love u.
    that way :)

    waiting for the next part

  1. Neeha said...:

    Yes please mention the parts & if possib giv us the links..
    Interesting one..
    Waiting for the next one..

  1. anushree said...:

    :),directorial touches....hehehe.loved it
    all ur suggestions well accepted and will be taken into consideration...thanks for reading
    stay blessed

  1. anushree said...:

    thanks dear...will keep that in mind