Heart whispers

Wednesday, September 22, 2010
so far apart
we are it seems
though i always
think of us together
deceiver love
has always been
yet its absence
immensely bothers
i miss
when it used to hurt
it hurts
when i miss it still
tempest in my heart
upraises as land 
from river to the hill
hunting by the sense of smell
when i wander behind the mist
my heart whispers .......
I LOVE YOU

11 comments:

  1. PULKIT said...:

    read it, but could not get even near to the feel of it... I guess... not in a state to read anything related to the emotion that the post concerned.

  1. anushree said...:

    take it easy yaar..
    i have been missing your post ..
    i know it wont fair if i demand the sequal.after knowing ur schedule..but wont lie m missing it yaar

    god bless u !!

  1. Virendra said...:

    hey..welcome back:)...after 2 months u hv posted something..well..all i can say about this....whoever will read this poem....gonna miss their lovedones...

  1. Neeha said...:

    I had read all your posts....I couldn't get the same feel....I dnt mean 2 hurt you..but the other posts are too good when comparedd...

  1. anushree said...:

    # virendra
    ino its been really long...but cudnt get enuf tym to write a post...
    i miss them too yaar..
    thanx for reading..
    cheers!

  1. anushree said...:

    # neeha
    thanx for reading...
    well wud surely try to not let any of my readers down..
    keep visiting
    tkcr

  1. Neeha said...:

    Yep sure..
    thnz 4 d reply..

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  1. PULKIT said...:

    read it again. loved it.
    beautifully written sis....
    wish someone would have written anything of that sort for me :P
    I would have married her the same day :D

  1. Mam it seems you are in deep love with some one..

  1. anushree said...:

    # Sahil Kumar
    yes i am in love..with life,
    keep reading