taqdeer ke panno se

Friday, July 23, 2010
डर लगता है आज, हवा के झोंके से
कहीं उड़ा न ले जाएँ
ये बादल मेरे सपने
कहीं  बिखर न जाए
ताश के पत्ते, मेरा आशियाना
जो टूटा इस बार आईना
तो रह जायेंगे सिर्फ चंद टुकड़े
जिनमें ये अक्स भी
फिर नज़र न आएगा


  1. as always...like your other touchy creations, even this one is very deep n poignant..
    but it's too short..kuch lines aur likhti yaar:-)

  1. PULKIT said...:

    A different perspective of clouds and rain...an interpretation of a gal, who is in nature of viewing things more creatively and from a stranger color :)

  1. anushree said...:

    thank u so much dear
    well i'll keep ur suggestion in mind next time..till then keep reading..

  1. anushree said...:

    # pulkit
    well its difficult to hide things from you...thus just a small thank u for commenting...
    god bless you!

  1. ashish said...:

    interesting thoughts with gud creativity and combination of graphics...keep it up ,welldone

  1. anushree said...:

    # ashish
    thanks alot...
    m glad u liked it.
    keep visiting