Travelling with Angel

Friday, June 10, 2011

 He crossed me once in my life
a creature elf  like
paragon of integrity
a messenger divine
he vowed to be there
and laid my fears aside

His words feel like sonnets
embracing each day new hope
i know he will not leave 
making it possible for me to cope
as far as i believe he will stay
and redecorate all my eves

His visit was a free will
fresh like daisies and daffodils
kindred spirit absolute godsend
showering love, blessings and mend
It's just a keepsake for times together
a thank you note from a scribbler

small contribution on the special day
all my love in an ordinary way.


p.s- i didn't know what i wanted to write
      i didn't know what i felt like
      trying to put in some words
      trying to pen it all tonight.

i dont know whether the above lines(and the ones at the beginning)  make some sense or not, i dont know whether the title is right or not.all i know is that these are innermost feelings completely honest and pure and a dedicatory post.


  1. virendra said...:

    awesome lines yaar...loved it..

  1. I wish your elf stays and keeps you happy always.

    It's always good to write when the heart lends grace to your words, so don't worry if you did not know what to right, this post was just right. :)

    Blasphemous Aesthete

  1. anushree said...:

    # virendra
    thanks a lot dear

  1. anushree said...:

    # Blasphemous Aesthete

    thanks for ur kind words..they are very encouraging.
    i want the elf to stay as well..
    thanks again for appreciating


  1. PULKIT said...:

    written in the raw form. Feelings and flow came out naturally at this one, and the personal connection could have been felt throughout ...
    Nice effort, a slight more polish could have cherished the poeticness of it even a little more, but overall a beautiful write up :)

  1. PULKIT said...:

    don't judge the writing style and level of literature in this link. Wrote it in 15 minutes quick time for just random fun. could not execute that well due to some stupid word limit and other context rules of including this many chracters and bla bla.... but anyways, I know u will find the plot strange :P

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  1. anushree said...:

    # Pulkit
    my loyal reader, friend, listner, shoulder i can always rely on..god bless u dear

    #darshan baweja

    thanks a lot