first and the third para,
left me enchanted...Impressed as always!
but I still wish... the fourth para to have bigger impact and a longing effect,continuity feel types... its a conclusion dangling statement and from such a complex person like u and ur 'never-to-end-a-thought' way of writing... It had a sudden end feel to the complete poem.
by the way T - junction... title justification I would like to hear..as and when I visit this page to check ur comment reply :)
do remember that :) m waiting
# pulkit
i knew this was to come my way...
this work of mine is a dedication thus i wanted to keep it short and to the point ,rather than elaborating...at times its worthy ..
secondly the justification for the title..
read together
" departure is not my wish
but at times its gud to let go"
and now the literal meaning to
T- junction "the road that u are on joins at right angle ,so that u have to turn either right or left to continue..."
keep smiling!
I know all about T-junctions... i guess most of us do, don't they..
i did not get the last word though- 'travail'..?
# musing gypsy
unpleasant hard work or difficult problems is what travail is ...
well well well
howz ya doing?
and m glad at least u visited my blog
keep reading
cheers
y woudln't i visit...its just that u never mail me urlinks, wen u post sumthng new.. :-/
aisi baat mat karo ki sounds like im a bozo... :P
so romantic and as always..beautifully penned..
good JOB...