T- junction

Tuesday, June 1, 2010

With each passing day 
endless desire to be with you
creeps in me to stay
love served as a perch
where sojourn  I lay

 I want to remain
departure is not my wish
but its only for our gain
this decision leaves me mugged
its difficult to express the pain

the distance will grow
grow our love strong                                                                                  
at times its good to let go                                                                                   
for if the bond is true                                                                                   
someday it will back flow


let love never fade                                                                                   
only it has the strength                                                                                    
to ease our travail.....                                                                                   


  1. so romantic and as always..beautifully penned..
    good JOB...

  1. PULKIT said...:

    first and the third para,
    left me enchanted...Impressed as always!
    but I still wish... the fourth para to have bigger impact and a longing effect,continuity feel types... its a conclusion dangling statement and from such a complex person like u and ur 'never-to-end-a-thought' way of writing... It had a sudden end feel to the complete poem.

  1. PULKIT said...:

    by the way T - junction... title justification I would like to hear..as and when I visit this page to check ur comment reply :)
    do remember that :) m waiting

  1. anushree said...:

    # virendra
    thanks for the appreciation
    keep reading!

  1. anushree said...:

    # pulkit
    i knew this was to come my way...
    this work of mine is a dedication thus i wanted to keep it short and to the point ,rather than elaborating...at times its worthy ..
    secondly the justification for the title..
    read together
    " departure is not my wish
    but at times its gud to let go"

    and now the literal meaning to
    T- junction "the road that u are on joins at right angle ,so that u have to turn either right or left to continue..."

    keep smiling!

  1. I know all about T-junctions... i guess most of us do, don't they..
    i did not get the last word though- 'travail'..?

  1. anushree said...:

    # musing gypsy

    unpleasant hard work or difficult problems is what travail is ...
    well well well
    howz ya doing?
    and m glad at least u visited my blog

    keep reading

  1. y woudln't i visit...its just that u never mail me urlinks, wen u post sumthng new.. :-/
    aisi baat mat karo ki sounds like im a bozo... :P