good bye:but good

Wednesday, October 28, 2009
hold my hand, stay back
wish could have said that
look into my eyes ,be mine
wonder these were my lines
with the glowing moon in that dim light
were the thoughts
when saw him cross the line.
freezed legs , sinking heart,stoned eyes n choked
was still waiting for the hope
wanted to touch the way i needed to be
and believe forever, he is there for me
at last hugged my own self
to show i was fine
for love is love
only when it equals wine
his sudden return
bought a distinct smile
"without you i cannot cover half a mile"
were the words told in a single line
"hold my hand ,look into my eyes
stay back and be mine".


  1. "hold my hand ,look into my eyes
    stay back and be mine".

  1. I am speechless. you have taken me in some other world..It was beautiful:-)agree with kishore.those lines are mesmerising.
    without you I cannot cover half a mile...

  1. Mesmerizing post... :)
    Simply Superb :)
    Loved it :)

  1. Simply Beautiful:)
    i was gonna do some work wen i read ur lines..n truely speaking..while reading it i forgot wat i had to do...i was in mah office n cud have been scolded by my boss....gosh ur poems r very dengerous..ha ha..

  1. anushree said...:

    #kishore choudhary

    thanks for appreciating
    m glad u liked it..

  1. anushree said...:

    # butterfly thoughts
    thanks alot for reading..
    m happy u were able to connect!
    thanks again

  1. anushree said...:

    # amit

    thank u dear!
    ur comments always bring lots of positive energy for me.

  1. anushree said...:

    # virendra
    thanks for takig out tym for mah post..
    next tym keep a check on ur boss while u do so...but keep reading

  1. nikita said...:

    u r jus vow..!!!
    cannot get d words out of my head... "HOLD MY HAND, LOOK INTO MY EYES , STAY BACK AND BE MINE.."